A Murder
It was a peaceful night in Korea,2013. In a small town small sound of footstep was heard. It reached to richest person's home and suddenly,a sound of gun banged. It banged for 10 time which is amount of people in his home. All the servant went home,so it was only 10. Detective heard it too, but he was too tired that he didn't tried to know what is it even his job is detective,and heard of that sound. Obviously, next day, one of the servant ran to detective's home, and cried that richest person died.Detective though that this servant is annoying because it was very early morning. However, detective went to the place that this case started .Detective had to meet someone after 2:10 AM,so he looked at the time. it was 6:00,AM.He finally arrived to richest person in the town. He thought and thought until he can find the answer of this case. But he couldn't, so he started to find a clue. He saw servant's fingerprint on gun that is lying down on the ground, but servantsaid that he cleaned his gun yesterday . But soon, detective found a piece of paper .Suddenly, detective thought,'Yeah. I'm obviously good detective!'
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Each ending shows a different culprit :) You could have elaborated more on the endings. Especially on ending 2, you introduced a new character called Mr.Simpson. It could have been better if you had introduced him in the body part.
ReplyDeleteI like your story!
ReplyDeleteI really like the murder!!!
ReplyDeleteIt was really fun and interesting.
Each ending had different stories. I liked how you made the audience get sucked into the book by telling there was the gun shot in the first part. Instead of telling about the detective, you could've kept on carrying on your readers by keep on making the story suspicious. But nice story anyway! Also remember to put some pictures!
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